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Thankful For All the Research Help

Research is always easier when there are research assistants helping. I would like to thank all the research assistants who helped with the field work or entering data. Both types of assistants helped a lot and made the process go faster.

Special thanks to those who gave up an entire weekend to help with field work.

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Left to right: Samantha, Casey, Jeyla, me, Dr. O’Hirok, and Dr. Hartman

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Left to right: Dylan, Patrick, Laura, Me

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(top) Left to right: Samantha, Dr. O’Hirok, me

(bottom) Left to right: Dylan, Reily, Brenna, and Kevin

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(top) Left to right: Dr. O’Hirok, me

(bottom) Left to right: Dylan, Tyler, and Sean

Weekly AARR Meeting on 2/12/16

Today marked our second weekly AARR meeting since our lead technician Paul Spaur moved on to his new career. Despite missing Paul, he luckily left our lab in pristine working order, leaving us with little to repair. Our goal for this meeting was to finish up our Pufferfish ROV control boxes for our BWET mentoring program, and was overall a success.

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Our AARR lab is continuing to grow, with new students joining us from our ESRM 370 “Remotely Piloted Systems” class. The ESRM 370 class today was very special, starting with an inspiring speech and visit from CSUCI’s President Rush. After, we had an informative presentation regarding the legal side of UAVs, given to us by Jonathan Rupprecht.

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The AARR lab is now looking forward to new projects in the coming weeks, including more mapping, building, and of course soldering.

Heading to TPSNR Tomorrow!!!

I am so excited that my TPSNR collection permit went through! I will be heading to TPSNR tomorrow to collect Torrey pine pinecones. While collecting the cones, I will record the location of the tree that the cones are collected from on a GPS device. Once, I am finish collecting the Torrey pine pinecones, I will then remove the seeds, which are going to be used in my common gardens experiment. These seeds will then be planted this Tuesday, February 16, 2016, in the CSU Channel Islands greenhouse.

You can see a drop of sap dripping off of the pinecone.
You can see a drop of sap dripping off of the pinecone.

Letting Go of You…. (Navigating Genres Blogpost #3)

To the “friend” I once knew,

Thank you for showing me that friendships aren’t easy. They take time to develop and grow into something more meaningful. But amidst all of the hardships, I guess I thought I knew who you were. I thought we were closer than that after having all of the real talks we had. I was there for you through a lot, and to find out that when I needed someone to be there at a rough time in my life, instead you were there judging me behind back and saying things like “I’m too nice” and that “it’s starting to feel fake”, hurt me the most. Even when you told me some of the choices you had made and were still making; so many people were judging you but I never once judged you for that. Instead, I defended you and was your friend in the most endearing way, even through the tough times. I tried to help you see the good in yourself and the reality of who you are for you. In those moments you confided in me, it felt like I could confide in you. Thank God that day never came, because I honestly thought we were true friends. Then again, the truth hurts sometimes; and the truth is I’m done. Not only because of the things you said, but because I’m tired of being pushed and shoved in all sorts of directions by you. I’m tired of not being heard, and for being judged when you knew I was in so much pain for losing a loved one at that time and almost losing several others. In fact I can’t believe I actually let the things you said behind my back get to me like this. Because at one point, it made me feel like I didn’t have any real friends here. What you had said even made go as far as questioning who I am and whether or not I was being sincere. Then I came to realize, who cares about what anyone thinks; because if you were truly my friend you’d be honest with me, instead of saying hi from a distance and acting like you know me because you don’t.

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It’s clear to me that the choices we’re making are completely different right now, and for that I get why we’re drifting apart. And since I’m being honest, I am more than ok with that. In fact, I’m glad it’s happening this way, because I don’t feel like I can be your friend anymore. I don’t want to have to sensor myself around you, out of questioning everything I say and whether or not it’s “too nice”. To be completely honest with you, I am a nice person and I’m not afraid to say that anymore because it’s genuinely true. You see, I know you think I give too many compliments and sometimes to complete strangers, but that’s who I am. I am the type of person who will compliment a complete stranger and not think twice about it. And if you are uncomfortable with that, then that’s your loss. Because I am a good person and a great friend. And if you can’t see that even now, then I guess this is goodbye.

Sincerely,

Malina

Works Cited

Smith, Louise. Living in the Past. 2011. Center for Spiritual Living. Letting Go of the Past. Web. 11 Feb. 2016.

Dirk, Kerry. “Navigating Genres.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 249-262. Writing Spaces. Web. 10 Feb. 2016.

 

Would you hire me?

In perpetration for the real world and aspirations I hope to achieve during this first year of collage I will be composing a mock cover letter for an environmental-ish internship I hope to sometime receive this coming summer:

 February 9, 2016

Dr. Stacy Anderson, English 107 professor

California State University Channel Islands

Camarillo, California 93012

Dear Dr. Stacy Anderson:

I am writing to you to express my interest in the position advertised as being open for this coming summer for your organization’s wildlife protection tactics. I am currently an Environmental Science and Resource Management student who will be completing my Bachelors of Science from California State Channel Islands in May of 2019. Although my focus of my studies have been resource conservation and restoration, I am knowledgeable in Ecology, resource development, Biology, Oceanology, Geology, and Chemistry as well. My resource conservation and Ecology experience, as well as my ability to learn quickly, tenacity and ability to apply knowledge effectively, would enable me to play a valuable role at your company.

My knowledge of human’s interactions with the environment, the natural cycles of nutrients, and conservation techniques together with my resource conservation and Ecology experiences. Has provided me with the skills necessary to succeed in today’s business world. I am familiar with resource and data collection, land surveying, and resource partitioning. I have not yet completed or received internships however with my background and aspiration to work in Environmental policy. My background includes the understanding of laws and regulations. As I have not received an official internship I have however participated in a research opportunity where I was able to travel to Santa Rosa Island.

I would bring to any position first rate communication skills oral as well as written, a pleasant and friendly personality, and the commitment to learn diligently and effectively. I seek to gain this opportunity now because as a trusted advisor told me “You only get three summers in college, and in each one you need to look to further your horizon” this is exactly what I set out to do. I hope to be able to gain momentum within my field to then further my knowledge and pallet so I can then go into law school. Where I would then set out to interpret the law and seek out the wrongs caused by corporations.

I look forward to hearing from you so that we can discuss this opportunity further.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Raul Perez

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Rhetoric

The media directly influences the way society views itself, specifically women and teens. The use of Pathos, Ethos, and Logos helps to further illustrates this by making the reader question whether or not they are meeting those societal standards. Logos is set forth to make the reader question whether they really know their body or if the ad agencies know more than they do. Pathos is set in to coddle the reader and let the reader know that all is okay because they, like many others, do not have the perfect body. Lastly, Ethos is set forth to make the reader question whether or not they want to continue conforming to the public. Thus leading the reader to question their stance on weight loss and or how to get there, usually ending in the reader buying some sort of weight loss product or fitness product.A Protein World advert displayed in an underground station in London makes New York splash in Times Square.

Although that is how rhetoric works, it is implemented to make the reader question themselves and to skew emotions, to have it used as a way to capitalize on revenue is a bit disheartening. With a bit of Photoshop and makeup the model above has now become the poster body of what a true beach body is.Advertising is one of the many ways that the public is given a fantasy and are told that they can make it into a reality. In spite of being disheartening that companies wield such power over the public they are also very skilled in using rhetoric to further their products or arguments.

 

RLW Reading

RLW reading is reading but not to understand the content of what you are reading but understand the structure of the piece to better understand why the author put these pieces together. It is also asking helpful questions about the work you are reading to view the authors reasoning of why the things he/she said were put in their writing . Some important questions you should ask yourself for example are; who wrote this piece either a student or a professor?, who is the intended audience? and are the techniques the author using helpful to get their point across? All of these questions should be helpful to put your own work together, with examples of professional writers. This should give you a clear example of what are some good writing techniques that worked for some authors or some that maybe you should stay away from when you are writing your papers. After analyzing the papers using RLW you should have notes that explain the structure of what you read such s the language being used the type of rhetoric used if any or the genre it is written. I am looking forward to start reading to understand the structure instead of the content I think it will really enhance my writing skills to more professional because now I will be actually using Language Composition in my writing. RLW is also going to make it easier for me to understand what I am going to be reading about.
When I was reading how “RLW reading” helps writers I automatically thought about my favorite story “The Yellow Wallpaper”. Even though it is a short story it has been the best story I have read that describes so many kinds of feelings in such short amount of time. The word structure the author uses grabs the readers attention.
“There are things in that paper which nobody knows but me, or ever will.
Behind that outside pattern the dim shapes get clearer every day.
It is always the same shape, only very numerous.
And it is like a woman stooping down and creeping about behind that pattern. I don’t like it a bit. I wonder—I begin to think—I wish John would take me away from here!”
This is one of my favorite parts from the book because it is foreshadowing what will happen the author also uses dark diction which creates a gloomy mood. It is the word structure that makes me really get in depth with what am reading. It also guides me to understand what really is happening with this lady. The structure used in this short story is definitely one that I would use to write a story. I would use this type of structure overall because I know it caught my attention and I know if I use it I will also catch peoples attention.
Work cited
Bunn, Mike.”How to Read Like a Writer.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 71-86. Writing Spaces. Web. 2 Feb. 2016.

SparkNotes Editors. (2006). SparkNote on The Yellow Wallpaper. Retrieved January 22, 2016, from http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/yellowwallpaper/

Existential Rhetoric

Shakespeare is a timeless writer, as are the messages of his many, many plays and sonnets; the man who invented over half of the words in the average English speaker’s vocabulary has a lot to say. Hamlet, one of Shakespeare’s most illustrious works, has what I would say is his most indelible message. Its impression correlating to its pragmatism in all cultures, societies, and personal identities; the progenitor question of all philosophy: why? Shakespeare extends this question to many facets, but most notably to ‘why be’ (directly by the titular character), or more eloquently: why is it worthwhile to continue living.

The article “Backpacks and Briefcases” by Laura Bolin implores the reader — and potential writer – to be aware of rhetorical devices and how they support the text. The rhetorical situation – exigence, audience, and constraints – regarding the question “to be or not to be” is easily paralleled to Shakespeare’s own life, that being the death of his son, Hamnet, and the following bout of depression he faced which urged him to write the play (Hamlet Act III Scene I; Bolin 48); the exigence is brought to light when reflecting on the notion that his son, being only eleven at the time of his death, would part from the mortal plane so soon. If a youth as cherished as Shakespeare’s own son was seemingly not deserving of life, then what was the point of going on with his own? Further more, why should he suffer through his son’s death? Through this situation Shakespeare appeals to one of man’s most prominent folly’s: the query of purpose in being and purpose in suffering.

Shakespeare easily plays to the audience’s naturally occurring desire for purpose, an ever present thing in human existence (explaining, in part, why the context of the play is so ubiquitous). While there are many existential arguments as to why living is worthwhile, a nihilist perspective is arguably the more rational. Hamlet presents the argument that only a fool would bear the “whips and scorns of time, [the] oppressor’s wrong, the proud man’s contumely, ” et cetera, and it’s compelling; there’s every reason to side with these notions, as they are presented in an empathetic (pathos), logical way (logos) from an intelligent character written by a credible playwright (ethos) (Hamlet). However, Shakespeare never explicitly responds to this exigence, and that is the most poignant part of his argument.

 

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The best the audience is given is a “let be” and somberly assuaging “the rest is silence” during the final scene of the play. Shakespeare masterfully makes the point that the constraints (ambiguity of an after life, moralistic implications of suicide, the church, et cetera) are entirely subjective, though they are inherently logical fears, and effectively responds to the exigence by doing absolutely nothing about it. However, that does not imply that the exigence is not worth considering; if that were the point there may as well be no play. The response is as open and pragmatic as the question itself and any one interpretation is arguably no more valid than another. It’s not an instruction; “the rest is silence” because we fill that silence.

 

Works Cites

Bolin, Laura Carroll. “Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps Toward Rhetorical Analysis.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 45-58. Writing Spaces. Web. 27 Jan. 2016.

Shakespeare, William. Hamlet. Ed. Harold Jenkins. London: Methuen, 1982. Print.

Reading to Write Like a Writer

In my senior year of high school, I took a creative writing class in hopes to reignite my once strong loveCreative art of writing. I expected the entire class to consist of short stories and fiction. What I got was more than that: memoirs, poetry, creative nonfiction, and more. I learned so much, thoroughly enjoyed my class, and I found myself loving writing again. Ever since, I found myself being more aware of writing characteristics, plot points, distinct choices, vocabulary, and the way writers wrote different books, articles, poetry pieces, and even scripts for TV shows and movies. I’d notice these changes and note how I’d make it different, maybe even better, in my opinion. I guess I’d always done that but just never noticed it.

This concept of paying attention to aspects of writing is a skill called Reading Like a Writer. When you Read Like a Writer, you “work to identify some of the choices the author made so that you can better understand how such choices might arise in your own writing” (Bunn 72). By using the choices of other writers, you can become a better writer, choosing to make similar choices or completely different ones, based on your preference and writing style.

The Woman WarriorFor example, one of the books we had to read in my creative writing class in preparations for our
memoirs was The Woman Warrior by Maxine Hong Kingston. It was a collection of memoirs that focused on Kingston’s lifestyles as a Chinese-Americans living in 20th century U.S. during the Chinese Revolution. Combining her autobiography with Chinese folktales, Kingston explains what her family was like, stories her mother told her of China before they came to the U.S., and the new life her family gained by crossing the ocean. While reading The Woman Warrior, I really got to understand Kingston. Not just by her stories, but by the choices she made in her writing; the stories she chose to tell, the ones she didn’t. Noticing her choices really helped me with writing my memoir and other pieces.

Even now, in my college English courses, I look back on the books, articles, and other writing pieces I’ve read over the years and let them help me decide how to write.

 

Works Cited

Bunn, Mike.”How to Read Like a Writer.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 71-86. Writing Spaces. Web. 2 Feb. 2016.

Kingston, Maxine Hong. The Woman Warrior: Memoirs of a Girlhood among Ghosts. New York: Knopf, 1976. Print.

More Than Meets the Eye

I am more than what you seeWe have all heard the phrase “Don’t judge a book by its cover” however it’s kind of in our blood to see things as they appear to be. Examples are all around us: media, books, real life.

One of my favorite books is Gregory Maguire’s Wicked, the book that inspires the Tony award winning musical by the same name. It surrounds the story of Elphaba, a girl from the land of Oz born with green skin. Being outcasted her entire life for being different, Elphaba grew up not believing that she could be anything other than a monster, for that was all people saw her as. It wasn’t until she met Galinda (later Glinda, the Good Witch of the North) at school that she started being someone else. After a rough beginning, Glinda Wicked Elphie and Glindastarted seeing Elphaba as a kind, unique, determined, smart, and talented young woman that was just misunderstood and didn’t need to follow anyone else’s opinion other than her own. The two eventually become best friends and help each other reach their full potential.

Rhetoric works the same way: seeing writing as more than what it appear to be. Understanding rhetoric can help us informed of the world around us. Take Wicked for example; a young adult book that uses a fictional land to tell the backstory for the girl who would eventually become the Wicked Witch of the West that we all know from the Wizard of Oz. But Wicked goes even further, telling the all-too familiar story we’ve all heard: a misunderstood teen that is trying to find themselves.

People around Elphaba were quick to judge her just based on her appearance. Even Glinda didn’t want to associate herself with Elphaba at first. We do the same things in similar situations, not associate ourselves with people that may look a certain way. But it’s our duty as human beings to see past the appearances and see their hearts and where they lie.

 

Works Cited

Bolin, Laura Carroll. “Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps Toward Rhetorical Analysis.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 45-58. Writing Spaces. Web. 27 Jan. 2016.

Maguire, Gregory. Wicked: The Life and times of the Wicked Witch of the West: A Novel. New York: Regan, 1995. Print.