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Read as I Wright

I imagine you have heard about the Flint Michigan  water crisis, well the article that I read is from VICE NEWS and looks at how the water supply was poisoned and how the people there were left to drink it. But I didn’t read it just any type of way, I Read like a Writer(RLW). The first thing to point out is the title “Smothering the Outcry”, its very obvious the should evoke an emotion out of you regardless of the intended audience. The author wanted a phrase that is eye-catching and will make you upset. The rest of the title has a similar effect and lets you know that the people in this article are victims and were attacked and someone is to blame also the author assumes that anyone reading this article has heard of the Crisis in Flint Michigan. The article we read in the class asked us to analyze the author intent through the process of reading like a writer which involves looking at the structure of an author’s work and making a judgment on the reading. After reading this artle is what clear tat held the local goverment of flint as well as the Governer responsible.

Works Cited

Bunn, Mike.”How to Read Like a Writer.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 71-86. Writing Spaces. Web. 2 Feb. 2016.

Rubles, Kyle. “Smothering the Outcry: The Inside Story of How the State of Michigan Poisoned Flint.” VICE News RSS. Vice News, 9 Feb. 2016. Web. 09 Feb. 2016.

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Naturally those who like to read are better writers. It is strange to see how those who do more than just read go above and beyond in writings. I personally do not see a reason to adapt this to a reading where I saw their experience of growing to be a better writer. Therefore I will talk about my own personal experience about my writing path.
Sentence structure was crucial in the school and it was to the point of having a specific structure to the way things where. No matter different approaches one tried to write when it came to essays points were always docked if the structure was not up to the teachers par. At times this became a lifesaver when one would procrastinate or just wanted to do the bare minimum and get an “easy A.”
It was not until my sophomore year in High School where I began to adapt to the writing skills of other authors. The teacher in my A.P. United States History class suggested that everyone in our class reads articles from TIMES, The New York Times, and various other upper articles. This suggestion really went a long way with me. I began reading these articles and saw the difference in my writing by me adapting to the writing of other professional writers. I realized that everything would be much easier if I just get straight to the point, repeat my point, and explain it. Also did I mention repeat my point one more time?

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RWL stands for Read Like a Writer. Typically I have never though about reading like a writer until I read an article about it called “How to Read Like a Writer” by Mike Bunn. After reading this article I have realized that there are two types of ways to read. The first way to read is to identify content or to better understand the ideas in the writing (which all readers do), and the second way is to try to understand how the piece of writing was put together by the author and what you can learn about writing by reading a particular text. Reading the second way can make the reader think about how the choices the author made and the techniques that he or she used are influencing your own responses as a reader. “The goal as you read like a writer is to locate what you believe are the most important writerly choices represented in the text-choices as large as the overall structure or as small as a single word used only once-to consider the effect of those choices on potential readers (including yourself)” (Bunn 72).

Bunn, Mike.”How to Read Like a Writer.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 71-86. Writing Spaces. Web. 2 Feb. 2016.

Heart Healthy Food Log

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Thursday: February 4, 2016

  • (1) apple and peanut butter (w/chia seeds and flax seeds)
  • (1) banana
  • (1) Brown rice cake
  • 16oz. soy chai with a shot of espresso
  • Brown rice, broccoli, and grilled chicken – lightly salted
  • (1) cup of olive oil popcorn – lightly salted
  • Salami, triscitts, and Havarti cheese
  • Protein shake with PB2 powder
  • Arugula salad with balsamic vinaigrette, parmesan, grilled chicken – lightly salted with a 1/2 cup of red quinoa mixed into the salad
  • Chocolate fudge Greek yogurt bar
  • ALOT of H2O! :)

I find that I eat fairly healthy on a regular basis, I do add salt to most meals but in very little portions.  The hardest part for me is to stay away from the sweets and the complex carbohydrates.  However, when I have the time to make a meal I make it as healthy as I can and prep for a couple days so I stay consistent.

Reading Salinger

A crucial part of the writing process happens before we even have the chance to pick up our pens. In order to be able to write effectively, we must be able to read effectively, so we can model our work after others. For the sake of this assignment I chose to read the short storyTeddy by J.D Salinger; though I had not read the story before, I am very familiar with Salinger’s work and background.

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Prior to reading, I followed the series of questions laid out in Bunn’s article “How to Read Like a Writer”, considering what the potential audience and message of the story may be, and whether or not I will be assigned to do any writings similar to this one (Bunn 76-78). Many of Salinger’s writings have to do with his experiences in the army, his bouts with depression, and his spiritual perspectives (particularly of Vedism), so when reading his works it is crucial to be watchful for those themes. Of course, as a science major, it’s unlikely that I will be asked to write any creative pieces for class, but I do write on the side for pleasure and take inspiration from Salinger’s works.

As I read through Teddy, the first evidence toward a depressive them is Teddy’s remark to his mother as he leaves their cruise ship cabin, that once he leaves he “may only exist in the minds of all of [his] acquaintances” and that he might be “an orange peel” (Salinger 170). The story progresses through Teddy’s interactions, primarily transitioning by means of his location aboard the ship; he first goes to the Sport Deck to see his sister (Salinger 172), before heading to do his own work on the Sun Deck. By choosing to divide the story by Teddy’s movements, it allows the audience to visualize his ventures to a greater extent.

The true purpose of the piece becomes more evident, however, through the dialogue that Teddy shares with Bob Nicholson, where Salinger’s religious views are explored explicitly. The genius twelve-year old and this stranger discuss the concept of “Vedantic reincarnation,” which Teddy largely supports as he refutes Nicholson’s attempts to counter its existence (Salinger 185). By reading like a writer, I can not only grasp that Salinger’s objective is to educate his audience about Vedism, but I also see that dialogue can be extremely telling in a piece of writing. Sheer description is not always enough to allow for the audience to see what the author is attempting to convey.

Reading like a writer is extremely effective in the case of fiction, since regular reading often only allows the reader to seek information (Bunn 74). When the intended lesson of a story isn’t so apparent as a nonfiction story, it is easy to ignore what is right in front of our eyes. I believe that in action, reading like a writer allows the reader to walk away with a greater understanding not only of the author’s purpose, but of how they can become clearer and more effective in their own works.

Works Cited

Bunn, Mike.”How to Read Like a Writer.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 71-86. Writing Spaces. Web. 2 Feb. 2016.

Salinger, J. D. Nine Stories. Boston: Little, Brown, 1953. Print.

First 2016 post

When you thinking of hip hop or Rap what do you think of? Guns? Violence? The Hood? Weed? p-dub-young-fly-saved-600x330Well, I imagine that out of all the different words that came to mind homosexuality and/or gay if so we are probably on the same page lol. To most the idea of homosexuality and hip-hop are like fire and water and it is not an unreasonable assertion since when the do mix it’s in the form of “Faggot” or “Fag”. But it’s 2016 and things are changing last year the oil and water mix were able to produce some explosive results. Last year the controversial song Throw That Boy Pussy by Young Fly Red, a young African American Queer Rapper from New Orleans. Initially, the song got a lot of pushback, even I had to listen to it a few time before I liked it but know it has over 2 million views.tumblr_inline_o1levjyyWl1tmb3cv_500

Well, The Huffington Post did a brief interview with Franklin Randall (Young Fly Red) discussing his music as well as his past and goals. But the part of the article that has a very strong rhetoric they have quotes of big name rappers supporting homosexuality as well as queer/gay rappers. The Ethos that is produced from this point on is impossible to argue with, artists such as Frank Ocean, Kanye West, A$AP ROCKY, Fat joe, Jay-Z, Nicki Minaj, T.I., Russell Simmons, Tyler the Creator, 50 Cent, Beyonce, and Eminem. If you read the Rhetoric  behind the whole article it’s definitely in full support of Queer artist but LGBTQ.

 

 

Week 3 of 2016

All,

Thanks for the great group editing session in Capstone yesterday. It sounds like most of you found that very useful. We’ll be doing this again.

I must apologize for not recording our in-class blog discussion yesterday. In summary, we talked about always making sure we use proper grammar and spelling, having a piece of multimedia in each post, and making sure all the rest of our webpage was complete (the about me, resume, and research overview).

As a reminder for next week, I expect:

  1. a complete website (including professional blog entries, resume, about me, and research project overview) including your weekly blog update. I will be assessing your WHOLE website next week. Recall that you have until Monday of each week to get up your weekly blog post.
  2. please fill in the following Google Sheet before the start of next class:    https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1TwkDp1iIC4B1GXgtjaJ2LKqSkfIxskqtP8X1zyAZPMo/edit?usp=sharing               It simply asks for the name of the WordPress theme, name of any plugins your are using, and any tips or tricks you have figured out. This will let other students who like your page be able to emulate it in part of in whole. Also recall that you are now all released from your restriction of having to use a standard WordPress Theme. It is up to you to either stick with your default (a fine option), or to try out alternative themes. I encourage you all to check out your fellow students’ blogs (their web addresses are also on that Google Sheet).
  3. bring in a complete draft of a map for your capstone sites. Barring you having a map, you can bring in the complete draft of your diagram/experimental design figure. This must be printed.

For anyone that wanted to incorporate yesterday’s comments into their first Methods draft, you may drop that revised Methods Section off to me in my office (BTW1265). As I said I will be in tons of meetings today, so please slip it under my door if I am not there. If you are indeed dropping it off today, please do so by 1pm.

This is an “easy” week in terms of things due for next Monday’s class. But please don’t let your foot off the accelerator. Keep charging on your revisions to your Intro, your Methods, have started on your results, etc.

Recall my next formal office hours are Friday 9-9:50 in the Tech Lab in Sierra. My “unofficial” office hours from noon to 2 on Mondays up at Tortillas/Pizza 3.14 seem to be going well and so I will be continuing those. Please do try to stop by any of my office hours on a given week if you can, even if it is just for a two minute update or to ask a brief question. This really helps me keep abreast of your progress (As do your blogs).

Thanks team. I really like the momentum you all have established. Keep up the good work!

-Dr. A

 

Real Eyes, Realize Different Writing Skills

In order to understand reading and know what you are reading you must learn to read like a writer. To read like a writer does not necessarily mean, “to read like an actual writer”, it means to understand how the author put the text together. In high school when I would get reading assignments for homework, I would read the material but as soon as I finished reading, I abcdid not have a clue what I had just read. Now that I understand the difference of reading normally and reading like a writer I am able to read and understand material. Not only am I able to understand what I’m reading but also realize the different styles of writing authors use and improve my writing skills as well. Although we might not realize how much our writing improves because it becomes a natural for us but it does. In a way it is like the saying “monkey see monkey do”, if we are reading proper writing from material that does not use slang our brain picks up certain vocabulary used by the authors then soon enough we are either using some of the words, quotes, and styles of writing as well which improves our writing skills without us realizing it. One of the first books I read after I began to take my time and really focus and understand what I had read, was “The Boy in The Stripped Pajamas” by John Boyne and I absolutely fell in love with it. I enjoyed reading the book because the author tells a story about a young boy, who’s dad is a Nazi, becomes friends with a Jew and ends up dying in a gas chambers made to kill Jews helping his friend look for his dad. The author made me want to continue reading and actually feel bad for the young boy. John Boyne  is using pathos in his own style of writing to get the readers attention. Also every time the author would explain the two young boys meeting up in secret makes you wonder interested in what is happening next. I’ve learned to use this pathos in my writing, in my own style of course, to catch the reader’s attention. This way when I am writing I am not boring the reading by making my writing too long and not getting to a point. As a reader I know what interest me therefore I am going to read material that is to my interest. Another reason why I like John Boyne’s style of writing in this book was because he painted a perfect picture for me, to understand what it was like living during a hard time like World War II without too much historical information. It is shocking how much a choice of certain words together or alone even can be so powerful and meaningful. That is what makes pieces of writing better and understanding words or word phrases is what helps us read like writers.

work cited

Boyne, John. The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas. London: R, 2008. Print.

Cut off from the Mind; Writing in Due Time (Analysis of RLW Blogpost #2)

The mind is a tricky thing; it is also a powerful instrument. Now, why should this be of concern to society? I automatically assumed it was due to the fact that all of mankind has one; but when John T. Furey and VIncent J. Fortunato address the Theory of MindTime: The relationships between thinking perspective and time perspective, that answer is not properly addressed. The interesting fact of the matter is that this scholarly article with an intriguing title which spends so much time using the tool of reasoning and analysis without stating what sparked the writer to begin addressing this topic in a way that connects with the reader. Theoretical topics are hard to create direct relevance towards, because without proper evidence proving that theory exists, it is non existent to the public eye and more of a series of theoretical terms that are hard to grasp. In most circumstances, a scholarly article is picked a part by it’s peers or “peer reviewed”, and in this case that is evident in the structure of which it was “built” upon. The writer seems to have overlooked the audience’s capabilities and understood it’s main goal was to subject the reader to learning more about their particular study with facts and statistics than connecting with the reader overall.

The author’s intended purpose was to prove his theory that the mind is interconnected with time in “Past, Present, and Future” aspects of thinking. That sentence alone intrigued me enough to keep reading. However, the following information wasn’t so easy to understand, yet the material wasn’t so much what I was focused on for once. In order to see the purpose behind what was in front of me, I had to see the outline in the techniques of the way this article was being written.  Author’s Furey and Fortunato showed me that even historical evidence is valid in the present and can be impactful towards the future. The main focus or “meat” of this article was the evidence that was presented throughout the study to greater prove Furey’s theory. Essentially everything is just a theory until proven otherwise with the proper evidence to back it up. Interestingly enough, Furey’s style of writing was filled with evidence for that same purpose- to prove his point. Writing is a series of constant “decisions”. (Bunn)  This made me see that in writing, the choices that are the least meticulous usually end up being the most creative, while the choices that are the most meticulous, end up being the most credible.

In all honesty in writing this post, the site crashed and I ended up having to rewrite it. And instead of trying to re-iterate what I once wrote, I reflected my “past” but ultimately came to the conclusion that a big part of writing is re-writing. To me, just in having to rewrite this simple post, it brought me a greater appreciation towards the process of writing in how to accept the past in order to embrace the present and move forward towards the future. This awareness in itself of perseverance and acceptance is what connects the relationship of how to read like a writer.

Works Cited

Bunn, Mike. “How to Read Like a Writer.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 71-86. Writing Spaces. Web. 2 Feb. 2016.

Fortunato, Vincent J., and John T. Furey. “The Theory of MindTime: The Relationship between Thinking Perspective and Time Perspective.” The Theory of MindTime: The Relationship between Thinking Perspective and Time Perspective. Science Direct, Mar. 2010. Web. 08. Feb. 2016

 

Maps and Methods 2/8/16

All of my points, tracks, and shoreline data are in ArcMap now. Working on my map is slow and painful. The tracks are looking good and clearly show the shoreline eroding away. I intend to us a program called Digital Shoreline Analysis System DSAS which will help compute the rate at which the beach is eroding. I was not able to survey this weekend. We have turned in our Methods section in our capstone project. I am pleased with how my work is looking, but need to keep pushing to stay ahead of the game. Fall2016Picture.2.4.16