Briana The Freshman 2016-02-24 02:57:49

Center Focus

A center of focus, people debate weather it’s a visually or a physical state of tranquility. Personally when I have a center of focus is through visuals. I see a visual image like an eclipse when writing. This is typical when I am gathering my thoughts it starts off pitch black. Whenever I am just spitting ideas I see almost like a little glimpse of light. Then slowly more and more light begins to appear as I begin to gather and connecting thoughts. Then finally when it all comes together when my final piece of work is done I see the full light and a moment of relief is just there.

 

Audience

Audience is tricky to see or go about in a particular writing style. Writing to go formal or completely informal is tricky because one may never know how writings get passed out and mentioned to other readers. For example, this Blog right now it is tricky to figure out a common ground because I myself am trying to figure out a common ground for this particular writing style. Desiding whether to be more descriptive or simple with words is tricky because making a common ground with a reader but still being formal is a problem.

 

Fruit Jell-O

Balancing quotes could often be tricky. Correctly blending quotes is even more difficult when not using the right type of structure. Even more than ever, I often find myself using a trick that I was able to learn back in High School. This trick I learned was a great way for quoting structure and is called a quote sandwich. I have previously discussed this in my video/ class lesson on quote sandwiches but the basics are a really great and simple way to get the job done. “The Bun” this is basically the introduction and how you want to create the quote to come off as. Next, there is “the meat” this is the good stuff the juicy detail that you want to share with the reader. Lastly, there is the bottom bun and that is to reiterate what the main point of using the quote was. Through being taught this lesson I have discovered that this is a lot more effective in my writing and actually could draw a reader even more into the writing.

 

 

Short time Writing

 

Short-term writing was always around me in my educational journey. Through distract testing I always-found time writings to be a pain/ hassle. In high school I was actually able to get my structure in writing down and in a crunch. Through AP classes I discovered that there was a specific formula when it came down to writing. The writing started with an hour time so one would have 5 minutes to plot/ outline the thesis conclusion and three supporting topics for the essay. With this time one would have 10 minutes to look for quotes and create the quote sandwiches used to be in the essay. Within the next forty- five minutes an essay would be made and to the best ability with some possible tears and hand cramps on the paper.

 

Pink Houses

Drive by’s are what I just explained in my video on through quoting. This is difficult when I write because I there am so many details that I want to be able to mention but not discuss and just get away with. However, I do see how this is a bad idea for my writing because if the reader is anymore like me I do remember the small details and try to connect the dots and see how the detail even correlates to the story.