Preliminary Understanding My Results

I began to interpret some of the results from my transects. When talking with other individuals with experience in coastal understandings of sediment, it has been suggested that there is likely to see more erosion during the summer time. This is predicted because Port Hueneme is a south facing beach and will encounter more swell impact. With my transect data we can see more change during the winter months. It is interesting to see more of the beach disapear durring the winter and less during the summer. We can also see the sand build up further south at some of the other more southern transects. The movement of sand can be seen. We are also seeing more scaps along the beach due to the winter storms.newplotnewplot (1)

Week of Meetings

I met with Tom O’Neal from Oxnard City College this week. His expertise and research at Port Hueneme have valuable to my capstone. He has been looking at the changing sand conditions at this beach for many years. We hope to collaborate together to help show the changes at Port Hueneme.

Geospacial Analysis Maps

My plan is to create two maps with the data that I am collecting. First, I will use Digital Shoreline Analysis System DSAS to analysis the shoreline change to see if it fits the predicted sediment transportation models. Second, I will make a DEM model of Port Hueneme using the points I have collected from my profiles. This will allow me to calculate the volume of sand that has moved. Instead of using the DEM model, I might be using Pix4D program. Pix4D is a program used to analyse 3D objects. It can create 3D models from 2D pictures. I hope to use this technology, along with a drone, to map Port Hueneme beach. This 3D model of Port Hueneme beach will give me interesting data and help quantify the volume of sand on the beach.

Simpler Way of Writing (Blogpost #4)

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I think we (as writers) can all agree that writing isn’t easy. In fact, it’s much easier to get lost in our thoughts let alone writing them. The most crucial part of writing is learning how to write, which in most cases only comes with practice. Imagine attending a class that teaches you all of these different tricks and concepts to be a better writer, but the only way to fully grasp those concepts, is in putting them into proper practice. Otherwise, they will remain concepts and theoretical ideas with no substance in your mind. By substance, I mean experiences in writing to revert back to when you get stuck. It’s easy to get stuck as a writer when there are simply no rules to writing. Admittedly, I am braking one of what I like to call “Throwback rules” that the majority of middle schoolers have all been taught to use. Things like don’t use “I” and definitely don’t use “You”. Well, my friends in order to not get stuck due to all the “Don’ts” you learned as a kid to help you write something made a little more sense back then can be thrown out the window now. What I’ve learned as a writer, is that sometimes you’ve got to break the rules in order to be creative in thought and not just grab but keep your readers attention. See, without practice in this area, there would be no direct connections being made to conceptualize these abstract thoughts in your mind and write them down in a clear meaningful way to where the reader can connect with your ultimate message on paper by simply reading it one time. Because, let’s be honest, most of us don’t have the attention span to be committed to it enough to read it once, let alone twice. Therefore, in order to keep your audience’s attention and help your message get across to the reader, you use metaphors; or what I like to call, putting a bunch of random words together and eventually having them make sense in the end. In order to do this, you must first let go of old structure, be creative in repetition, use collective thought, know your audience, and finally balance your own writing between abstract thought and rationality.

A huge part of writing, is letting go of structure. And what I’m saying by “structure” I mean the basic rules of writing or the “Don’ts” where “…writing seems more like a chore than a living process that connects people and moves the world forward” (E. Shelley Reid, 4). Sometimes when all you’re used to is structure, it may seem like there are a thousand rules to writing, when in reality there are only three main principles that I like to call the three P’s: Passion, Picture, and Purpose. What I took out of Shelley Reid’s, Ten Ways to Think About Writing: Metaphoric Musings for College Writing Student when reading these direct principles, was that it’s easier to write about something you can be passionate about in order to paint a picture for the intended purpose you’re trying to portray to your audience.

Repetition makes everything subtly re-addressed so that the writer’s message sticks in your mind, like that chorus from that one song you keep hearing on the radio. Now this is easier said than done when in my case, there’s more than one point to address. However, if the picture is painted clear enough, the ultimate purpose of the paper will have at least gotten through to the reader. It’s hard not to feel like you’re constantly repeating yourself when rewriting the same message over and over again, but in different ways. For example, I could say that the sky is clear and the reader would get the picture in a relatively boring and broad manner; or I could say the sky is clear as day, the sun is shining brightly on my face, and there are no clouds in sight. Description is an important key factor in using repetition. In fact, in most cases they go hand in hand. In my experiences with writing, description tends to make repetition seem less repetitive and more easily connected. Description helps paint the picture in making connections to each point being made by giving it more meaning. In short, description (if used correctly) equals definition.

It’s easy to get off subject, especially when rushing into the main topic. Shelley Reid explained what I took as, the importance of having collective thought. She liked to call it, the higher and lower brain (Reid 18-19). This is the area that I am most unfamiliar with, which is why it intrigued me so much. Reid addressed how using the higher brain for as long as possible before the lower brain kicks in is the best way to go. In order to do so one must simply “…read the gosh darn question” and answer it in a simplified version so that you’re points are clearly stated for yourself before going into depth right away and getting off track with your lower brain (Reid 19-20). Reading about this helped me to fully understand the purpose behind this paper by taking away the lessons I learned from reading the material provided, and writing in a way that helps me to make the proper connections towards that piece in establishing direct guidelines from other resources to use in the way I present my own writing using collective thought in order to provoke collective action.

It’s easy to be relatable if you know who you’re trying to relate to. Audience is sometimes more complicated than simple. For example, when Reid explains how although there may be a general audience you are addressing, there are also secondary audiences that may come into play (10). What helped me the most was by reading that, “It also helps to imagine a very specific primary audience (a person or small group or publication), so that instead of staring at the screen thinking vague “some people” thoughts, you can quickly come up with just the right words and information to match that audience’s needs…” (Reid 10). By doing this, it helps the reader to not simply glance over your information but feel directly immersed in the writer’s thoughts.

Reid used a very simple way to explain how to balance writing overall using cherries and jello. However, I’d like to get straight to the point and say that writing consists of two key aspects: abstract thought and rationality. Both of which, when put together can create a more realistic perspective in which the writing becomes less of a theory and more of a reality; because it is more “relatable” to the audience it is addressing. By “it” I mean the three P’s: Passion, Picture, and Purpose. These phrases are more difficult to follow when all your told as a kid is what to write and how exactly to write it, making writing difficult instead of easy. Therefore, there is no right or wrong way of writing; there is just a simpler way of understanding.

Works Cited
Thomas, Ryan. “Demystifying a Common Misconception About Writing.” ASCD Edge.
N.p., n.d. Web.
Reid, E. Shelley. “Ten Ways To Think About Writing: Metaphoric Musings for College
Writing Students.” Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 2. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2011. 3-23. Writing Spaces. Web. 17 Feb. 2016.

FInished Water Quality Data Collection

Last weekend I went to my five sites to collect water quality data. I took 5-10 readings from each site just to get variety. I will then take the averages of those readings to compare data between each site. I will also collect data again in a few weeks to see if there are any changes. This data will aid me in my GIS map where I correlate land use around each site with water quality. The picture above is from the Santa Clara site under Bouquet Bridge. There are some fish in this water but they are unfortunately not stickleback.

Marine Debris Surveys on Santa Cruz Island

This weekend I was lucky enough to go to Santa Cruz Island and survey 3 beaches on the West end of the island for marine debris. I have never been to this side of the island before so it was an amazing experience! Robyn, Dorothy, & I got to the island on Friday and left Saturday, for such a short trip we got a lot done.

We arrived at Prisoner’s Harbor around 11ish on Friday, and by the time we got the truck and got to our first location, Sauce’s Beach, it was around 1pm. That beach took the three of us roughly an hour, even though it had the most trash and we had to hike through the canyon to access it. I used my boyfriend’s giant frame pack, which was way too big for me, to pack out the trash and it was a lot easier than just carrying the trash out like normal! Will definitely use a frame pack again for surveying Santa Rosa Island. After we finished Sauces Robyn made the executive decision to head out to Fraiser Point before the sun when down, so that Saturday morning we would only have Christy Beach to survey and we wouldn’t have to rush back to catch the boat since Christy was a lot closer. We took off to the west end of the island to survey Fraiser Point and to my surprise there was not a lot of marine debris. This point gets pounded by surf and winter swells though, and I imagine a lot of debris got swept out with the surf. There were a few lobster trap fragments and fiberglass pieces there, though.

After that we drove back to Christy Ranch and set up camp for the night. It was an amazing place to camp and I feel so lucky I got the chance to do so! In the morning we drove down the canyon a little ways and survey Christy Beach. This beach (as well as the others we surveyed) were inundated with mylar balloons – most of them being from Valentines Day. We had to have removed ~20 or so balloons in such a short trip, I was amazed!

Another night there would have been awesome, just to take in that part of the island a little bit more but overall it was an amazing trip! This week I plan on processing all of the collected marine debris.

 

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Rules for Writing

As college students, we are constantly bombarded with advice on how to approach our writing and our academics, but perhaps the best advice does not come through worksheets and grammar quizzes, but through simple and understandable metaphors such as those presented in Reid’s “Ten Ways to Think About Writing: Metaphoric Musings for the College Student.”

“Show and Telepaths”

While we are writing, it is easy to assume that our readers have the same knowledge as we do. What may seem to be common knowledge to one person could be completely foreign to another. This is an important factor to remember particularly when composing research pieces, in which it is crucial to specifically explain your thought process for your results to be valid.

“Pink Houses and Choruses: Keeping Your Reader With You”

As much as I personally detest excessive repetition, repetition in moderation is quite necessary in writing. This isn’t to say that the same words and phrases should be reiterated over and over again within the same paper, but rather, stresses the importance of the thesis of the paper. Finding creative ways to advise your reader of what is to come not only improves the reader’s ability to understand your writing, but also acts as an assist in keeping your writing on track yourself. It is easy to find ourselves wandering from our thesis and addressing different topics as we write, only to return to the beginning of our paper to find that we have strayed far from what we wanted to address.

“Wash and Wear Paragraphs”

I often find myself revising my own papers and finding some paragraphs that have extended over a page in length, while others consist of only two or three simple sentences. As is addressed in the article, some variation in paragraph length is an effective means of creating a layer of interest in our writing, but it is also important to remember to keep the paragraphs a reasonable length. Particularly in papers that are already quite lengthy, extremely paragraphs may seem “rambly” and may cause readers to lose interest.

Example of an annotated text

Example of an annotated text

“Hey Hey Hey and the Textbook Conspiracy: Annotating Your Reading”

It is so easy to look at an article or textbook or novel and want to just skim through and gather what appears on the surface to be the “important parts” of the writing. I am very guilty of this, especially with shorter articles with strict deadlines. I have personally found that when I have a hard copy of a text and actively highlight and write notes in the margins as I read, I achieve a much greater level of understanding than I possibly could have by skimming the surface of the text.

“Rules vs. Rhetoric”

As useful as all of this advice and all of these rules seem to be, it is up to us as writers to make the calls when it comes to our writing. It is crucial for us to be able to own our writing as ours, and not the product of what somebody else is dictating us to compose.

Works Cited

Reid, E. Shelley. “Ten Ways To Think About Writing: Metaphoric Musings for College Writing Students.” Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 2. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2011. 3-23. Writing Spaces. Web. 21 Feb. 2016.

GIS again

After receiving feedback from classmates last week, I found some time to tweak the map I had made. While still from the final version, it’s getting there. (I just realized I forgot north arrows and scale bars, that will be worked on this week.)

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Carpinteria State Beach

Well this week has been truly busy, we had a Steve Whitiker come in and talk about sandy beach monitoring to the high school students that was Wednesday 2/17. Then on Thursday 2/18 the two high school classes went out to Carpinteria State Beach to finally do the research that we have been training them for. It was a long day and it started out with all of us going to the Sea Lion rookery that is right there. We saw a lot of seals and there were a number of pups there. So that was really cool for them to see. Then there was a state park ranger that came by and talked to the kids about the Chumash and the history of the beach. After that we had pizza for lunch and the kids had time to explore a bit.

 

Now the research begins. This was a very long day because it was very windy and there were a lot of students that came up to the rocky intertidal area at the same time so it got a little crowded but over all it went very well and I am very happy with how it all went.

The same thing happened with the middle school but there was no wind but the surf was still really high and there were a lot more of them but it still went very well.

our little rock has so many people
our little rock has so many people