Is it Creative Habit or Rhetoric?

On the topic of rhetoric it is everywhere on our social media pages, our favorite movies, the way we speak and even dress. It is amazing to see how the topic of rhetoric goes on to form this triangular form. There is the topic that is trying to be persuaded upon the audience through the author or illustrators point of view.
With the new semester I took a giant step into taking a new class that would be completely outside of our comfort zone. So here it goes imagine me biochemistry major taking performing arts 101. Here is a word to the wise when entering this class no it is not a dance class this is more of an evolution of theater arts (yes a big disappointment). We are currently reading a book called The Creative Habit Learn by Twyla Tharp. Although this book is an assigned reading for performing arts it includes more rhetoric then any book I have ever read and this book would be a shame not to use in my examples of rhetoric.
To give this book a bit of background Twyla Tharp is a famous dancer and choreographer. The book written was to help form creative thinking and a better understanding of why we do certain things in our daily lives and consider them a comfort without noticing. In her first chapter she explains how from her own personal experience that shows must always go on no matter how big or small the situation that the world will not stop for anyone. She speaks from a choreographers point of view and discusses how there’s a ladder effect on just missing one show and how that amounts to everyone going negative in making money that day of not practicing or preforming.
The next chapter discusses rituals and they are not always doing everything at the same time every single day. A ritual is not always daily and it can happen at any point of the day, sometimes at various times of the day. For example, Twala goes on to discuss how she knows a chef who cannot start his day until he tends to his herbs and spices. This is some people feel there comfort and when this was said I immediately went through my day trying to figure out what my daily ritual was and if it stands out to other people. Twala is right everyone has a ritual whether it be big or small there is something that is done daily that would throw off ones day if it was not done daily.
This book would not be assigned to a dance class unless it was trying to get us to consider thinking a certain way. I believe that Twyla Tharp’s book has me slowly becoming more of a creative thinker. She even has me thinking I will become this famous performer which probably will not happen – but she has me thinking that I will. Maybe through this book I will push myself out of my comfort zone.

The Power of Words

We have all heard the phrase “Actions speak louder than words” but sometimes words are more powerful. If you know the right things to say, sometimes there’s no need for any action to take place just by the simple flow of the words its good enough. In the text “Backpacks vs. Briefcases” 2it explains about how developed our rhetorical skills are without us really knowing we have them because we have slowly learned to detect rhetorical messages. Even with just doing a simple task there’s all sort of persuading ads trying to get you to buy something or convincing you into believing or rethinking certain things. Most of the times books have hidden meanings or a purpose the author wants to share with the rest of us. So when they write there’s a hidden rhetorical message somewhere between the pages.
One of my favorite books is The Book Thief, in my personal opinion it’s a heart-wrenching story about how words are more powerful than what we give them credit. At times without really meaning to we say things that stick to people whether it’s in a positive way or a negative way is completely up to you. The point is words stick with us like memories whether it’s from something a loved one once told us to words from our books, words are a big part of life.
The Book Thief mentions the power of words frequently throughout the novel to the point where it’s a reoccurring theme. One quote that really stands out is “I have hated words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right.” In this quote the protagonist is describing her own thoughts about words and how she thinks she has to make words right so they can have a positive effect in the lives she has touched with her words. She has said it so many times that words can affect you for the rest of your life and the narrator of the novel which is Death tells the readers that she affected him so much for her words more than her actions and that she will always be dear to him.
One thing about the power of words is that there is no way that you can make1 words powerful if you don’t believe they are powerful and that words are enough to accomplish things without action meaning war and violence. “The best word shakers were the ones who understood the true power of words. They were the ones who could climb the highest.”
The Book Thief constantly convinces us that words are powerful and beautiful. The entire story is just full of life in itself and the way Death describes life as hauntingly beautiful is in a sense accurate but the way he makes the words flow is rhetorical and poetic. “I wanted to tell the book thief many things, about beauty and brutality. But what could I tell her about those things that she didn’t already know? I wanted to explain that I am constantly overestimating and underestimating the human race-that rarely do I ever simply estimate it. I wanted to ask her how the same thing could be so ugly and so glorious, and its words and stories so damning and brilliant.” The perfect ending because Death gives us his opinion of Life which is quite ironic. Since he’s trying to convinve us life is beautiful.

Works Cited

Bolin, Laura Carroll. “Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps Toward Rhetorical Analysis.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 45-58. Writing Spaces. Web. 27 Jan. 2016.

Zusak, Markus. The Book Thief. New York: Alfred A. Knopf, 2006. Print.

End of Winter Break Blog Post

The last few weeks of Winter Break has been very productive. At the beginning of break, I processed the majority of my sand samples. This data will tell us the grain size of the sand and how it is distributed across the beach through the different times of the year. During break, I also successfully surveyed Port Hueneme on some low tides prior to and after some of our winter storms. This will be compared against the previous movement of the sand and allow us to track the movement of the sand. Visually, my profiles are also showing the movement and down coast. Primarily understanding my data are proving the movement of the Port Hueneme Untitled (2) 20151221_163945sand. 

1984 Rhetorical Analysis

Many writers living in the aftermath of World War II expressed a great deal of contempt toward totalitarian systems of government in their works. George Orwell wrote the dystopian novel 1984 to force his readers to question the integrity of their governments. The article “Backpacks and Briefcases” urges us to ask what the rhetor may be responding to as a means of discovering the exigence of the rhetorical situation (Bolin 48). The publication of the novel coincides with the aftermath of World War II and the rise of more totalitarian forms of government, such as Stalinism in Russia. Orwell’s response to these events also plays to the mindset of his audience, who is living in the same period and thus has the same fearful perspective on totalitarianism.

"Big Brother Is Watching You" (CC BY-NC-SA 2.0) by thefoxling

“Big Brother Is Watching You” (CC BY-NC-SA 2.0) by thefoxling

Orwell’s primary protagonist, Winston Smith, works for The Party by editing history, already leading the audience to believe that this fictional government can not be trusted. He spends his days modifying dates and production predictions in the national newspaper so the rest of Oceania can live under the impression that their economy is improving, rather than plummeting (Orwell 39). This parallels the ways in which totalitarian systems sought to brainwash and hide the truth from their citizens through propaganda. The propaganda present throughout the novel is reminiscent of those of Nazi Germany, depicting “monstrous figure[s] of Eurasian soldier[s]” that drive even the least patriotic proles to support the war effort (Orwell 149). Orwell is aware that his audience will have a strong reaction to these images, having only recently been subject to bombardments of similar messages during the wartime.

Knowing the context in which the novel was composed, as well as the background of the author can allow us to draw what his purpose is. Bolin encourages readers to ask what it is the rhetor wants them to do with their message (52). I would interpret all of Orwell’s appeals to the authority of government as a message to his readers to question the societies that they live in. While there is no direct message of uprising or warfare against totalitarian systems, at the very least Orwell wishes for others to call into question the extent to which their governments run their lives. To some extent, the rhetorical purpose of the novel is to convince the readers to become active consumers of the political rhetoric that surrounds them.

Inherent in all sides of the rhetorical triangle and all facets of the rhetorical situation are the three artistic appeals proposed by Aristotle, but Orwell plays primarily to pathos (Bolin 52). The love story between Winston and Julia allows the reader to form a personal connection with the characters, and thus sympathize with them to a greater extent when the government interferes in their affair, resulting in their torture (Orwell 222). A potentially dry message about governments stripping individuals of their autonomy presented in narrative form makes all the difference to a reader.

It is critical to not only be fully aware of the rhetoric presented to us in academic settings and in novels, but also that which is presented to us in our daily lives. This can make all the difference in how we choose to perceive the world we live in.

Works Cited

Bolin, Laura Carroll. “Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps Toward Rhetorical Analysis.” Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. Ed. Charles Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. Vol. 1. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor P, 2010. 45-58. Writing Spaces. Web. 27 Jan. 2016.

Orwell, George, and Erich Fromm. 1984. New York, NY: Signet Classic, 1961. Print.

Spring 2016 Begins…

At the end of January 2016, my capstone has evolved into an examination of relationships between solar radiation levels and land topography. The scientific research into this relationship has been explored more and more in recent years, as the nature of solar radiation levels and impacts on climate shifts and changes to vegetation and hydrology become ever more critical. Among many research papers to be published on the subject, a few notable examples include:

Impact of 3-D topography on surface radiation budget over the Tibetan Plateau; Wei-Liang Lee, et al.; Theoretical & Applied Climatology, July 2013.

GIS-based modelling of topography-induced solar radiation variability in complex terrain for data sparse region; Min Liu, et al.; International Journal of Geographical Information Science; July 2012.

A comparative analysis of DEM-based models to estimate solar radiation in mountainous terrain; J.A. Ruiz-Arias, et al.; International Journal of Geographical Information Science; Aug. 2009.

The land surrounding the Cal State CI campus possesses a wide range of topographical features, from steep canyons to vast flat farmland to stretches of sandy beaches. Using the combined data from solar radiation level collection at specific points along with levels obtained from satellite imagery, a picture can be formed using GIS applications to in essence “map” the solar radiation levels and variability for the area. This work has the potential to be of great use to many fields of science as well as land planning and management.

 

 

Spring 2016 semester begins

Over the break I spent 11 days on SRI on this trip I GPS waypointed 1600 tress and still have many more to go. The project is moving foward and the GIS work is starting to move foward.

Update (2/1/2016)

Last semester, I placed five cameras on Santa Rosa Island to detect non native rodents. I have been unable to check the cameras since late October, but the batteries in each camera will last up to six months.

Last time I was able to check, much of the local wildlife had been captured. Thankfully, no non native rodents were detected. Some native mice were captured though, along with plenty of foxes, and a few spotted skunks. Below is one of the many foxes spotted in Lobo CanyonIMG_0212

Finishing up the data processing

As of today I have sample populations of Sand crabs from 16 beaches processed and will be sharing this data at the Surfrider meeting Tuesday evening. I have been lucky to find 6 undergraduate students that are interested in working on the different aspects of my project! This will rocket forward the processing of the 50 plus sand samples I have in the lab and allow me the time to finish processing the 26 other sample populations of sand crabs I have.

So far 14 of the 16 sample populations have had sand crabs with particles or fibers ingested. I know that every single sand sample processed has had fibers and/or particles in it so I am interested to find out what the remaining crab samples look like.

Winter Break Update

Over the break I went to five locations: Santa Clara River (two locations), San Francisquito Canyon, Bouquet Creek, and Soledad Canyon. I not only looked for fish, I also took pictures of the location sites so I can asses the changes before and after El Niño. The only place I found fish was under Bouquet Canyon Bridge in the Santa Clara where the Valencia Wastewater Treatment Plant releases its water. There were several species of fish in the small pond but most were too big in size to be considered stickleback. Due to scheduling conflicts and unavailability of the lab I was not able to complete water quality probe training which I was not happy about considering we have already had a few big rains. My next steps are to collect water and sand samples for evaluation through Dorothy’s microplastic project, and to follow up on some tips as to other locations the UTS may be present.

Winter Break Wrap-Up

Winter break has come and gone, and it is now time to get back into the swing of things to finish out my year-long capstone project. I feel like I had a successful winter break in terms of my project, as I was able to accomplish many tasks. With the help of my advisor from the National Park Service, we were able to make some final tweaks to my study design, which allowed us to hit the ground running and implement a robust study. Also with the help of the National Park Service, we were able to put together, and broadcast, a native seed mix in my study plots. Thankfully we were able to broadcast this seed before a major rain event, and when I completed a field assessment two weeks ago, I already had some seed germination. Fingers crossed successful germination will continue across all my plots! I’m hoping to go out to Santa Cruz Island in the next week to do another field assessment to check germination progress.